Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Alliteration poems

Teacher's note:  The poems below were written while we were studying alliteration (the repetition of the same sounds).  I want our young authors to be able to use alliteration in both their prose and their poetry, and these alliteration poems were a great way to practice the concept.   While these are very cute, a lot of learning came from doing them.  Our writers came up with an original poem, but they also learned exactly what alliteration is.  Plus, we were able to add that to our "large word vocabulary," along with onomatopoeia and others we enjoy saying and hearing.  (We love big words!)  
 
 
The puppy played purple
 
By Kylee

Puppy
The puppy
The puppy played
The puppy played Purple
The puppy played Purple Penguin
The puppy played Purple Penguin Princess
The puppy played Purple Penguin Princess and
The puppy played Purple Penguin Princess and pretended
The puppy played Purple Penguin Princess and pretended to paint
The puppy played Purple Penguin Princess and pretended to paint plum
The puppy played Purple Penguin Princess and pretended to paint plum pie.


The purple penguin, Pam

By Jon

Penguin
The penguin
The purple penguin
The purple penguin, Pam
The purple penguin, Pam, played
The purple penguin, Pam, played Playful
The purple penguin, Pam, played Playful Patterns
The purple penguin, Pam, played Playful Patterns with
The purple penguin, Pam, played Playful Patterns with Peg
 The purple penguin, Pam, played Playful Patterns with Peg Penguin.


The blue boy's bike 
By Cable

Boy
The boy
The blue boy
The blue boy’s bike
The blue boy’s blue bike
The blue boy’s bad blue bike
The blue boy’s bad blue bike barreled
The blue boy’s bad blue bike barreled by
The blue boy’s bad blue bike barreled by Bob.


The dog dumped dirt down

By Gage

The
The dog
The dog dumped
The dog dumped dirt
The dog dumped dirt down
The dog dumped dirt down the
The dog dumped dirt down the drain
The dirty dog dumped dirt down the drain
The dumb, dirty dog dumped dirt down the drain.

The puppy, Penny
By Ethan

Puppy
The puppy
The puppy, Penny
The puppy, Penny, played
The puppy, Penny, played playfully
The puppy, Penny, played Polly playfully
The puppy, Penny, played Polly Penguin playfully.


The dirty dog

By Kayden
The
The dog
The dirty dog
The dirty dog dug
The dirty dog dug a
The dirty dog dug a dozen
The dirty dog dug a dozen drains
The dirty dog dug a dozen drains dangerously.

The boy bought the bone 
By Dylan G
           
Boy
The boy
They boy brought
The boy brought the
The boy brought the bone
The boy brought the bone to
The boy brought the bone to the
The boy brought the bone to the bee.



The bad brown bird
 
By Megan

Bird
The bird
The brown bird
The bad brown bird
The bad brown bird bent
The bad brown bird bent the
The bad brown bird bent the bench
The bad brown bird bent the bench badly.

The cute cat 
By Chloe

Cat
Cute cat
The cute cat
The cute cat cried
The cute cat cried ‘cause
The cute cat cried ‘cause Chloe
The cute cat cried ‘cause Chloe cried.

The dazzling dancers 
By Taylor

Dancers
The cancers
The dazzling dancers
The dazzling dancers did
The dazzling dancers did the
The dazzling dancers did the disco
The dazzling dancers did the disco dance.
 

The pink polka-dotted puppy 
By Meris

Pink
Pink polka-dotted
The pink polka-dotted
The pink polka-dotted puppy
The pink polka-dotted puppy pretended
The pink polka-dotted puppy pretended to
The pink polka-dotted puppy pretended to play
The pink polka-dotted puppy pretended to play Patty’s
The pink polka-dotted puppy pretended to play Patty’s Penguins.

Beautiful Beach Barbie 
By Julia

Barbie
Beach Barbie
Beautiful Beach Barbie
Beautiful Beach Barbie did
Beautiful Beach Barbie did a
Beautiful Beach Barbie did a back
Beautiful Beach Barbie did a back flip.

Tina, the toymaker

By Makayla

Tina
Tina the
Tina the toymaker
Tina, the toymaker, tumbled
Tina, the toymaker, tumbled toward
Tina, the toymaker, tumbled toward the
Tina, the toymaker, tumbled toward the toy
Tina, the toymaker, tumbled toward the toy taker.

The cute cat 
By William

Cat
The cat
The cute cat
The cute cat climbed
The cute cat climbed the
The cute cat climbed the chair
The cute cat climbed the chair curiously.


The dog dug deep

By Calista

The
The dog
The dog dug
The dog dug deep
The dog dug deep during
The dog dug deep during the
The dog dug deep during the dark
The dog dug deep during the dark day.


The bad brown bird
 
By Jerrod

Bad
The bad
The bad brown
The bad brown bird
The bad brown bird bought
The bad brown bird bought a
The bad brown bird bought a brown
The bad brown bird bought a brown birdhouse.


Billy bit big banana 
By Dillon

Banana
Big banana
Bit big banana
Billy bit big banana
Billy bit a big banana
Billy bit a big brown banana
Billy bit a big brown banana book
Billy Bob bit a big brown banana book.

Friday, February 4, 2011

That's Good! That's Bad!

By Hunter, Jera, and Blake C.


The little girl was going to McDonald’s. That’s good! No, that’s bad!

They were closed and the little girl cried. That’s bad! No, that’s good!

The next day they were open and she went back. That’s good! No, that’s bad!

She ordered everything on the menu. She couldn’t eat it all. That’s bad! No, that’s good!

She put the leftovers in the ice box and had them for later when she was hungry again. That’s good! No, that’s bad!

She got a stomachache. That’s bad! No, that’s good!

Then her mom cooked her homemade tomato soup and her stomach felt better. That’s good! No, that’s great!

Good News! Bad News!


By Jerrod


Good news!  No school.
Bad news!  It’s a snow day.
Good news!  I can play video games.
Bad news!  My dad took the controllers to work.
Good news!  I have my own computer.
Bad news!  My computer is broken.
Good news!  I have two computers in the house.
Bad news!  It’s covered with princesses and since I am a boy I don’t like princesses.
Good news!  The snow has melted.
Bad news!  My bike was frozen.
Good news!  I have a scooter.

Thursday, February 3, 2011

That's Good! That's Bad!

By: Kayden, Jon, Blake H., and Dillon S.

The ice cream man gave a little girl a cookie dough ice cream cone for free. 
That’s good! 
No, that’s bad!

The little girl dropped her cookie dough ice cream cone and cried. 
That’s bad! 
No, that’s good!

The ice cream man gave her another one.  She ate it all. 
That’s good! 
No, that’s bad!

She ate too much ice cream and got sick. 
That’s bad! 
No, that’s good!

Her mom made her chicken noodle soup and she felt better! 
That’s good! 
No, that’s great!

Good News! Bad News!

By Ethan, Julia, Calista, and William

Good news!  I got a trampoline
Bad news!  I jumped off and hit a rock.

Good news!  I didn’t get hurt.
Bad news!  A dog bit me.

Good news!  I didn’t have to go to the hospital.
Bad news!  My leg was bleeding.

Good news!  I put a Band-Aid on it and it stopped bleeding.
Bad news!  My Band-Aid fell off in the shower.

Good news!  I had a 100 more.
Bad news!  All the rest are princess ones.

Good news!  There was a girl walking around selling Band-Aids.
Bad news!  She was only selling Princess Band-Aids.

Good news!  She had one boy Band-Aid in her back pocket!

Good News! Bad News!

By Gage, Dylan G., Meris, and Makayla

Good news!  No school today.
Bad news!  We can’t go outside.

Good news!  We could watch TV.
Bad news!  Dora was on.

Good news!  It was the end of the show.
Bad news!  The same show was on again.

Good news!  We can go outside now.
Bad news!  There is no one to play with.

Good news!  A kid came outside.
Bad news!  He doesn’t like us.

Good news!  Another kid came outside.
Bad news!  He was a nerd.

Good news!  He did our homework.
Bad news!  It took him awhile to do it.

Good news!  He was done before dinner.
Bad news!  We had to go to bed after dinner.

Good news!  We got to stay up for an extra hour.
Bad news!  We had to wake up at 6 the next morning.

Good news!  School got snowed out!
Bad news!  We can’t play in the snow because the door is frozen shut.

Good news!  Our garage is full of snow.
Bad news!  We can’t sled in our garage.

Good news!  Mom said we can go outside through the garage door!

Friday, May 21, 2010

The "cherished item" poems

These poems were written in mid-May.  The first stanza is a "you can take away" verse.  The second is "I can do without."  The third is "I can live without."

You can take away my bed,
You can take away my preacher,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My 3rd grade teacher.

I can do without my house,
I can do without reach,
But I can’t do without
My really great teacher.

I can live without water,
I can live without leech,
But I can’t live without
My really nice teacher.


Cayti
5-13-10




You can take away my DS,
You can take away my shoe,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My beloved Lucy Lu.


I can do without markers,
I can do without glue,
But I can’t do without
My happy Lucy Lu!


I can live without my bed,
I can live without blue,
But I can’t live without
My playful Lucy Lu!


Shelby
5-13-10




You can take away my shoes,
You can take away my key,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My dear dog, Browny.


I can do without boys,
I can do without skis,
But I can’t do without
My dear dog, Browny.


I can live without my voice,
I can live without Susie,
But I can’t live without
My dear dog, Browny.


Tabitha
5-13-10



You can take away my dishes,
You can take away my house,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My little blue mouse.

I can do without an IPod,
I can do without a blouse,
But I can’t do without
My little blue mouse.

I can live without my room,
I can live without my dog house,
But I can’t live without
My little blue mouse.

Ally
5-13-10




You can take away my drawings,
You can take away my IPod,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My puppy dog.

I can do without food,
I can do without my pool,
But I can’t do without
My dog-she rules!


I can live without music,
I can live without cake,
But I can’t live without
My puppy-she’s so great!


Tori
5-13-10




You can take away my doll,
You can take away my log,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My beloved dog.

I can do without my DS,
I can do without my hog,
But I can’t do without
My lovely little dog.


I can live without my TV.,
I can live without my pog,
But I can’t live without
Chloe, my pretty dog.

Haley
5-13-10



You can take away my IPod,
You can take away my log,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My salt and peppered dog.

I can do without markers,
I can do without a hog,
But I can’t do without
My miniature schnauzer dog.

I can live without new things,
I can live without a jog,
But I can’t live without
Sissy, my playful dog.

Lexi
5-13-10




You can take away my Wii,
You can take away my rink,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My blanket that is pink.


I can do without my bike,
I can do without my baby that winks,
But I can’t do without
My blanket that is pink.

I can live without a swing set,
I can live without my hermit crab that can sink,
But I can’t live without
My blanket that is pink.

Jaycee
5/13/10




You can take away my DSI,
You can take away my shoe,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My dog named Lucy Lu!

I can do without games,
I can do without blue,
But I can’t do without
My dog, Lucy Lu!


I can live without rats,
I can live without glue,
But I can’t live without
My dog, Lucy Lu!


Sydney
5-13-10

You can take away my shoe,
You can take away my house,
But PLEASE don’t take away
My favorite rubber mouse.


I can do without Easter,
I can do without blubber,
But I can’t do without
My mouse made of rubber.


I can live without fudge,
I can live without flubber,
I can’t live without
My mouse made of rubber.


Roy
5-13-10

Sunday, March 28, 2010

Would you, could you: Third grade writers innovate on a Dr. Seuss classic

One of the ways young writers learn is by innovating on a pattern -- especially one they really like.  Recently, our writers did their own version of Dr. Seuss' Green Eggs and Ham.  Read this and enjoy, but if you'd like, come by and look at the picture book version in class, one they illustrated themselves.  The book really brings the text to life, and, in many cases adds visual jokes to the book that you would be able to "get" by just reading the text below.

Suzie.
Snoozie Suzie.
Steak and beans.
Beans and steak.
By Cade,Mariah, and Kayla

Do you like beans and steak?
Do you like steak and beans?
If you try them you will see
You will like them just like me!
By the whole class in collaboration

Would you, could at school?
Would you, could you in the pool?
I would not, could not at school.
I would not, could not in the pool.
By Shelby


Would you, could you with a bear?
Would you, could you on a chair?
I would not, could not with a bear.
I would not, could not on a chair.
By Logan


Would you, could you in a fire?
Would you, could you with a liar?
I would not, could not in a fire.
I would not, could not with a liar.
By Dallas

Would you, could you on a bus?
Would you, could you with Gus?
I would not, could not on a bus.
I would not, could not with a Gus.
By Mandi

Would you, could you while jumping out of a tree?
Would you, could you while being stung by a bee?
I would not, could not while jumping out of a tree.
I would not, could not while being stung by a bee.
By Cayti

Would you, could you at Wal-Mart?
Would you, could you at Car Mart
I would not, could not at Wal-Mart.
I would not, could not at Car Mart.
By Roy

Would you, could you with a hat?
Would you, could you with a cat?
I would not, could not with a hat.
I would not, could not with a cat.
By Sydney


Would you, could you at the mall?
Would you, could you in the hall?
I would not, could not at the mall.
I would not, could not in the hall.
By Lexi

Would you, could you in hay?
Would you, could you in May?
I would not, could not in hay.
I would not, could not in May.
By Haley


Would you, could you at the store?
Would you, could you with a core?
I would not, could not at the store.
I would not, could not with a core.
By Jaycee

Would you, could you in my yard?
Would you, could you while playing cards?
I would not, could not in your yard.
I would not, could not while playing cards.
By Cade


Would you, could you in the fog?
Would you, could you with a dog?
I would not, could not in the fog.
I would not, could not with a dog.
By Tabitha


Would you, could you with a mop?
Would you, could you while you hope?
I would not, could not with a mop.
I would not, could not while I hop.
By Tabitha

Would you, could you in the bakery?
Would you, could you at the lakery?
I would not, could not in the bakery.
I would not, could not at the lakery.
By Ally

Would you, could you for a dime?
Would you, could you while seeing a mime?
I would not, could not for a time.
I would not, could not while seeing a mime.
By Tori

Would you, could you with a nail?
Would you, could you with a tail?
I would not, could not with a nail.
I would not, could not with a tail.
By Mariah

Would you, could you on a cruise ship.
Would you, could you if the ship would tip?
I would not, could not on a cruise ship.
I would not, could not if the ship would tip.
By Kayla

Would you, could you in a ball?
Would you, could you with a doll?
I would not, could not in a ball.
I would not, could not with a doll.
By Jaden

Would you, could you in a store?
Would you, could you at a door?
I would not, could not in a store.
I would not, could not at a door.
Anonymous


Would you, could you in the sky?
Would you, could you when you fly?
I would not, could not in the sky.
I would not, could not when I fly.
By Noah


Would you, could you in a cave?
Would you, could you while you save?
I would not, could not in a cave.
I would not, could not while I save.
By Jack

Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Third graders writers craft "roses are red" poems for Valentine's Day

We're studying and writing poetry in writer's workshop, and our young poets wrote "roses are red" poems to begin the unit.  While all could start with "roses are red," their only restriction was that the second line could not be "violets are blue."  The result were poems in an A/B/C/B pattern, where the second and fourth line rhymed.  Enjoy their great senses of humor and their first attempts at rhyming poetry!

Roses are red. 
My socks are smelly.
Yours are too
And my last name is Kelley.

Kayla


Roses are red.
Hearts are green.
Ms. Jacobs is cool.
But me, I am mean.

Roy
(He really isn’t. ~Ms. Jacobs)


Roses are red.
Dandelions are yellow.
Jack is my friend
Because he is a good fellow.

Noah


Roses are red.
Leaves are green.
Right now it’s winter.
Can’t wait ‘til spring.

Mandi


Roses are red.
Matthew is funny.
I really don’t like him.
But he looks like a bunny.

Jack


Roses are red.
Dogs are cute.
And tails are too.
Do you toot?

Mariah


Roses are red.
Tulips are yellow.
Strawberries are good
Just like a cello.

Lexi


Roses are red.
Roses are black.
I like Ms. Jacobs
And she likes me back.

Ally


Roses are red.
Hearts are pink.
I love you
And you stink.

Jaycee


Roses are red.
Puppies are brown.
And they are cute
And they go to town.

Cayti


Roses are red.
My shirts are slush.
This soup is  yuck.
But I like this mush.

Cade


Roses are red.
Stars are yellow.
Teachers are nice
And you are too.

Blake


Roses are red.
My dog is white.
Clean my room?
I just might.

Shelby


Roses are red.
Water bottles are black.
I like cheese
But it makes me yak.

Sydney


Roses are red.
The sun is yellow.
When I look at it
I turn mellow.

Jaden


Roses are red.
Lexi’s shirt is pink.
I don’t like fairies.
Especially Tink.

Tori


Roses are red.
Flowers are coo coo.
Ms. Jacobs is sweet.
And guess you are too.

Kobe


Roses are red.
Love is too.
You are a puppy
And I love you.

Haley


Roses are red.
Daisies are yellow.
Cade needs to go to the restroom.
But I won’t let him in, fellow.

Dallas


Roses are red.
They don’t bring me down.
Dogs are brown.
They give no frown.

Tabitha