Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Third graders writers craft "roses are red" poems for Valentine's Day

We're studying and writing poetry in writer's workshop, and our young poets wrote "roses are red" poems to begin the unit.  While all could start with "roses are red," their only restriction was that the second line could not be "violets are blue."  The result were poems in an A/B/C/B pattern, where the second and fourth line rhymed.  Enjoy their great senses of humor and their first attempts at rhyming poetry!

Roses are red. 
My socks are smelly.
Yours are too
And my last name is Kelley.

Kayla


Roses are red.
Hearts are green.
Ms. Jacobs is cool.
But me, I am mean.

Roy
(He really isn’t. ~Ms. Jacobs)


Roses are red.
Dandelions are yellow.
Jack is my friend
Because he is a good fellow.

Noah


Roses are red.
Leaves are green.
Right now it’s winter.
Can’t wait ‘til spring.

Mandi


Roses are red.
Matthew is funny.
I really don’t like him.
But he looks like a bunny.

Jack


Roses are red.
Dogs are cute.
And tails are too.
Do you toot?

Mariah


Roses are red.
Tulips are yellow.
Strawberries are good
Just like a cello.

Lexi


Roses are red.
Roses are black.
I like Ms. Jacobs
And she likes me back.

Ally


Roses are red.
Hearts are pink.
I love you
And you stink.

Jaycee


Roses are red.
Puppies are brown.
And they are cute
And they go to town.

Cayti


Roses are red.
My shirts are slush.
This soup is  yuck.
But I like this mush.

Cade


Roses are red.
Stars are yellow.
Teachers are nice
And you are too.

Blake


Roses are red.
My dog is white.
Clean my room?
I just might.

Shelby


Roses are red.
Water bottles are black.
I like cheese
But it makes me yak.

Sydney


Roses are red.
The sun is yellow.
When I look at it
I turn mellow.

Jaden


Roses are red.
Lexi’s shirt is pink.
I don’t like fairies.
Especially Tink.

Tori


Roses are red.
Flowers are coo coo.
Ms. Jacobs is sweet.
And guess you are too.

Kobe


Roses are red.
Love is too.
You are a puppy
And I love you.

Haley


Roses are red.
Daisies are yellow.
Cade needs to go to the restroom.
But I won’t let him in, fellow.

Dallas


Roses are red.
They don’t bring me down.
Dogs are brown.
They give no frown.

Tabitha

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