Sunday, March 28, 2010

Would you, could you: Third grade writers innovate on a Dr. Seuss classic

One of the ways young writers learn is by innovating on a pattern -- especially one they really like.  Recently, our writers did their own version of Dr. Seuss' Green Eggs and Ham.  Read this and enjoy, but if you'd like, come by and look at the picture book version in class, one they illustrated themselves.  The book really brings the text to life, and, in many cases adds visual jokes to the book that you would be able to "get" by just reading the text below.

Suzie.
Snoozie Suzie.
Steak and beans.
Beans and steak.
By Cade,Mariah, and Kayla

Do you like beans and steak?
Do you like steak and beans?
If you try them you will see
You will like them just like me!
By the whole class in collaboration

Would you, could at school?
Would you, could you in the pool?
I would not, could not at school.
I would not, could not in the pool.
By Shelby


Would you, could you with a bear?
Would you, could you on a chair?
I would not, could not with a bear.
I would not, could not on a chair.
By Logan


Would you, could you in a fire?
Would you, could you with a liar?
I would not, could not in a fire.
I would not, could not with a liar.
By Dallas

Would you, could you on a bus?
Would you, could you with Gus?
I would not, could not on a bus.
I would not, could not with a Gus.
By Mandi

Would you, could you while jumping out of a tree?
Would you, could you while being stung by a bee?
I would not, could not while jumping out of a tree.
I would not, could not while being stung by a bee.
By Cayti

Would you, could you at Wal-Mart?
Would you, could you at Car Mart
I would not, could not at Wal-Mart.
I would not, could not at Car Mart.
By Roy

Would you, could you with a hat?
Would you, could you with a cat?
I would not, could not with a hat.
I would not, could not with a cat.
By Sydney


Would you, could you at the mall?
Would you, could you in the hall?
I would not, could not at the mall.
I would not, could not in the hall.
By Lexi

Would you, could you in hay?
Would you, could you in May?
I would not, could not in hay.
I would not, could not in May.
By Haley


Would you, could you at the store?
Would you, could you with a core?
I would not, could not at the store.
I would not, could not with a core.
By Jaycee

Would you, could you in my yard?
Would you, could you while playing cards?
I would not, could not in your yard.
I would not, could not while playing cards.
By Cade


Would you, could you in the fog?
Would you, could you with a dog?
I would not, could not in the fog.
I would not, could not with a dog.
By Tabitha


Would you, could you with a mop?
Would you, could you while you hope?
I would not, could not with a mop.
I would not, could not while I hop.
By Tabitha

Would you, could you in the bakery?
Would you, could you at the lakery?
I would not, could not in the bakery.
I would not, could not at the lakery.
By Ally

Would you, could you for a dime?
Would you, could you while seeing a mime?
I would not, could not for a time.
I would not, could not while seeing a mime.
By Tori

Would you, could you with a nail?
Would you, could you with a tail?
I would not, could not with a nail.
I would not, could not with a tail.
By Mariah

Would you, could you on a cruise ship.
Would you, could you if the ship would tip?
I would not, could not on a cruise ship.
I would not, could not if the ship would tip.
By Kayla

Would you, could you in a ball?
Would you, could you with a doll?
I would not, could not in a ball.
I would not, could not with a doll.
By Jaden

Would you, could you in a store?
Would you, could you at a door?
I would not, could not in a store.
I would not, could not at a door.
Anonymous


Would you, could you in the sky?
Would you, could you when you fly?
I would not, could not in the sky.
I would not, could not when I fly.
By Noah


Would you, could you in a cave?
Would you, could you while you save?
I would not, could not in a cave.
I would not, could not while I save.
By Jack