One of the ways young writers learn is by innovating on a pattern -- especially one they really like. Recently, our writers did their own version of Dr. Seuss' Green Eggs and Ham. Read this and enjoy, but if you'd like, come by and look at the picture book version in class, one they illustrated themselves. The book really brings the text to life, and, in many cases adds visual jokes to the book that you would be able to "get" by just reading the text below.
Suzie.
Snoozie Suzie.
Steak and beans.
Beans and steak.
By Cade,Mariah, and Kayla
Do you like beans and steak?
Do you like steak and beans?
If you try them you will see
You will like them just like me!
By the whole class in collaboration
Would you, could at school?
Would you, could you in the pool?
I would not, could not at school.
I would not, could not in the pool.
By Shelby
Would you, could you with a bear?
Would you, could you on a chair?
I would not, could not with a bear.
I would not, could not on a chair.
By Logan
Would you, could you in a fire?
Would you, could you with a liar?
I would not, could not in a fire.
I would not, could not with a liar.
By Dallas
Would you, could you on a bus?
Would you, could you with Gus?
I would not, could not on a bus.
I would not, could not with a Gus.
By Mandi
Would you, could you while jumping out of a tree?
Would you, could you while being stung by a bee?
I would not, could not while jumping out of a tree.
I would not, could not while being stung by a bee.
By Cayti
Would you, could you at Wal-Mart?
Would you, could you at Car Mart
I would not, could not at Wal-Mart.
I would not, could not at Car Mart.
By Roy
Would you, could you with a hat?
Would you, could you with a cat?
I would not, could not with a hat.
I would not, could not with a cat.
By Sydney
Would you, could you at the mall?
Would you, could you in the hall?
I would not, could not at the mall.
I would not, could not in the hall.
By Lexi
Would you, could you in hay?
Would you, could you in May?
I would not, could not in hay.
I would not, could not in May.
By Haley
Would you, could you at the store?
Would you, could you with a core?
I would not, could not at the store.
I would not, could not with a core.
By Jaycee
Would you, could you in my yard?
Would you, could you while playing cards?
I would not, could not in your yard.
I would not, could not while playing cards.
By Cade
Would you, could you in the fog?
Would you, could you with a dog?
I would not, could not in the fog.
I would not, could not with a dog.
By Tabitha
Would you, could you with a mop?
Would you, could you while you hope?
I would not, could not with a mop.
I would not, could not while I hop.
By Tabitha
Would you, could you in the bakery?
Would you, could you at the lakery?
I would not, could not in the bakery.
I would not, could not at the lakery.
By Ally
Would you, could you for a dime?
Would you, could you while seeing a mime?
I would not, could not for a time.
I would not, could not while seeing a mime.
By Tori
Would you, could you with a nail?
Would you, could you with a tail?
I would not, could not with a nail.
I would not, could not with a tail.
By Mariah
Would you, could you on a cruise ship.
Would you, could you if the ship would tip?
I would not, could not on a cruise ship.
I would not, could not if the ship would tip.
By Kayla
Would you, could you in a ball?
Would you, could you with a doll?
I would not, could not in a ball.
I would not, could not with a doll.
By Jaden
Would you, could you in a store?
Would you, could you at a door?
I would not, could not in a store.
I would not, could not at a door.
Anonymous
Would you, could you in the sky?
Would you, could you when you fly?
I would not, could not in the sky.
I would not, could not when I fly.
By Noah
Would you, could you in a cave?
Would you, could you while you save?
I would not, could not in a cave.
I would not, could not while I save.
By Jack
Sunday, March 28, 2010
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